Manaiakalani Film Festival 2010 "Once Upon A Time "

The Junior's Fishing Trip By Charlie Ray

On Monday we went to the Panmure Wharf.
It was cool. We went with the teachers and the
parents. We got to the wharf. We wind the
fishing line down into the water and then we
took photos.
"Oh, no"! We did not catch any fish. And when
we got back we ate fish and chips. We had fun.

The School's Fishing Trip By Kraven

On Monday we went fishing at the Panmure
Wharf. We went there with the teachers and
parents. "Oh, no"! I was sad when we didn't
catch any fish. After that we went back to
school to have fish and chips

Fishing Trip By Jacob

On Monday we went fishing at Panmure Wharf.
We walked to the Panmure Wharf. Miss Barlow
gave us some stuff to attract the fish. We haven't
got any fish. We had fish and chips when we got
back to school. I felt tired after the fishing trip.

THE END

Monday Fishing by Ajani

On Monday we walked to Panmure Wharf and
we went fishing. We got to the Panmure Wharf.
"Oh, No," I said, "We have no bait on our fishing
rod". That means we will catch no fish. But we
still had a good time. And when we got to school
we ate fish and chips.

Monday Fishing By Ana

On Monday we went fishing at Panmure. We
went to Panmure and we didn't catch any fish.
"Oh, no," Ana said, "We didn't catch any fish.
That is OK." Then we came back to school.
We had fish and chips. We had a nice day.

Fishing Story By Michael

On Monday we went fishing at the Panmure
Wharf and our parents and our Nannies came too.
I put my fishing rod into the sea and waited and
waited and waited. But we did not get any fish.
That's OK. We went back to the classroom.
We had fish and chips. I had a good day.

Our Learning Intentions

We are learning to plan our stories.
We are learning to see the parts that make up a story.
We are learning to make our stories interesting.

Setting the Scene - Part of Writing a Story

Once upon a time in a cave lived Ana.
By Charlie Ray

Far, far , away, Charlie-Ray lived in a place called Rainbow's End.
By Ana

Once upon a time there was a freezing sun way up high.
By Jacob

Once upon a time there was a beach in Tonga. The water was cold. There was a lot of fish in the water.
By Michael


A long time ago there was a boy called Jacob.
By Ajani

Jacob is Persuasive

I think Mrs Kelly should buy us an ice block.
We work hard and we are hot. We are thirsty.
That's why I think Mrs Kelly should buy us an
ice block.
By Jacob

Cavhyon Persuades Mrs Kelly!

I think Mrs Kelly should buy us an ice block
because we are good. We work hard. It is so
hot. We are thirsty.
By Cavhyon

Ana Is a Hard Worker!

Ana works so hard she thinks she should get an ice block!

I think Mrs Kelly should buy us an ice block. We
work hard on our writing. They are cheap. We are
thirsty. Mrs Kelly should buy us an ice block.

By Ana

PLEASE!!!! - buy us an ice block!!!!

Charlie Ray wants an ice block.
Could he persuade you?


I think Mrs Kelly should buy us an ice block
because we are always good and always brainy.
I really think Mrs Kelly should buy us an ice block.

Michael Tries To Persuade
Mrs Kelly To Buy An Ice Block

I think Mrs Kelly should buy an ice block. We
are being good in the classroom. We are good.
We are working hard and an ice block is yummy.
PLEASE Mrs Kelly we are very good.
By Michael

PLEASE!!!! - buy us an ice block!!!!

We are all very good at using persuasion to get
something that we want. Kraven wants an ice
block - why should I buy him one??????


I think Mrs Kelly should buy us an ice block
because we have been working hard in class.
We are hot and thirsty. That is why I think
Mrs Kelly should buy us an ice block.
By Kraven

In My Opinion ...

What advice would you give three little pigs
who are going to build themselves a house?
We are learning that when you give an opinion
that you have to give a reason to support it!

The Wizards