Thursday, June 10, 2010

Our Learning Intentions

We are learning to plan our stories.
We are learning to see the parts that make up a story.
We are learning to make our stories interesting.

Setting the Scene - Part of Writing a Story

Once upon a time in a cave lived Ana.
By Charlie Ray

Far, far , away, Charlie-Ray lived in a place called Rainbow's End.
By Ana

Once upon a time there was a freezing sun way up high.
By Jacob

Once upon a time there was a beach in Tonga. The water was cold. There was a lot of fish in the water.
By Michael

A long time ago there was a boy called Jacob.
By Ajani