Monday, August 23, 2010
The Junior's Fishing Trip By Charlie Ray
On Monday we went to the Panmure Wharf.
It was cool. We went with the teachers and the
parents. We got to the wharf. We wind the
fishing line down into the water and then we
took photos.
"Oh, no"! We did not catch any fish. And when
we got back we ate fish and chips. We had fun.
The School's Fishing Trip By Kraven
On Monday we went fishing at the Panmure
Wharf. We went there with the teachers and
parents. "Oh, no"! I was sad when we didn't
catch any fish. After that we went back to
school to have fish and chips
Thursday, August 19, 2010
Fishing Trip By Jacob
On Monday we went fishing at Panmure Wharf.
We walked to the Panmure Wharf. Miss Barlow
gave us some stuff to attract the fish. We haven't
got any fish. We had fish and chips when we got
back to school. I felt tired after the fishing trip.
THE END
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Monday Fishing by Ajani
On Monday we walked to Panmure Wharf and
we went fishing. We got to the Panmure Wharf.
"Oh, No," I said, "We have no bait on our fishing
rod". That means we will catch no fish. But we
still had a good time. And when we got to school
we ate fish and chips.
Wednesday, August 18, 2010
Monday Fishing By Ana
On Monday we went fishing at Panmure. We
went to Panmure and we didn't catch any fish.
"Oh, no," Ana said, "We didn't catch any fish.
That is OK." Then we came back to school.
We had fish and chips. We had a nice day.
Fishing Story By Michael
On Monday we went fishing at the Panmure
Wharf and our parents and our Nannies came too.
I put my fishing rod into the sea and waited and
waited and waited. But we did not get any fish.
That's OK. We went back to the classroom.
We had fish and chips. I had a good day.
Wharf and our parents and our Nannies came too.
I put my fishing rod into the sea and waited and
waited and waited. But we did not get any fish.
That's OK. We went back to the classroom.
We had fish and chips. I had a good day.
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