Showing posts with label persuasive writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label persuasive writing. Show all posts

Tuesday, May 18, 2010

Jacob is Persuasive

I think Mrs Kelly should buy us an ice block.
We work hard and we are hot. We are thirsty.
That's why I think Mrs Kelly should buy us an
ice block.
By Jacob

Cavhyon Persuades Mrs Kelly!

I think Mrs Kelly should buy us an ice block
because we are good. We work hard. It is so
hot. We are thirsty.
By Cavhyon

Ana Is a Hard Worker!


Ana works so hard she thinks she should get an ice block!

I think Mrs Kelly should buy us an ice block. We
work hard on our writing. They are cheap. We are
thirsty. Mrs Kelly should buy us an ice block.

By Ana

PLEASE!!!! - buy us an ice block!!!!

Charlie Ray wants an ice block.
Could he persuade you?


I think Mrs Kelly should buy us an ice block
because we are always good and always brainy.
I really think Mrs Kelly should buy us an ice block.

PLEASE!!!! - buy us an ice block!!!!

We are all very good at using persuasion to get
something that we want. Kraven wants an ice
block - why should I buy him one??????


I think Mrs Kelly should buy us an ice block
because we have been working hard in class.
We are hot and thirsty. That is why I think
Mrs Kelly should buy us an ice block.
By Kraven

Tuesday, March 23, 2010

In My Opinion ...

What advice would you give three little pigs
who are going to build themselves a house?
We are learning that when you give an opinion
that you have to give a reason to support it!