Showing posts with label simple narrative. Show all posts
Showing posts with label simple narrative. Show all posts

Thursday, August 19, 2010

Fishing Trip By Jacob


On Monday we went fishing at Panmure Wharf.
We walked to the Panmure Wharf. Miss Barlow
gave us some stuff to attract the fish. We haven't
got any fish. We had fish and chips when we got
back to school. I felt tired after the fishing trip.

THE END

Wednesday, August 18, 2010

Monday Fishing By Ana


On Monday we went fishing at Panmure. We
went to Panmure and we didn't catch any fish.
"Oh, no," Ana said, "We didn't catch any fish.
That is OK." Then we came back to school.
We had fish and chips. We had a nice day.

Fishing Story By Michael

On Monday we went fishing at the Panmure
Wharf and our parents and our Nannies came too.
I put my fishing rod into the sea and waited and
waited and waited. But we did not get any fish.
That's OK. We went back to the classroom.
We had fish and chips. I had a good day.