Fishing Trip By Jacob

On Monday we went fishing at Panmure Wharf.
We walked to the Panmure Wharf. Miss Barlow
gave us some stuff to attract the fish. We haven't
got any fish. We had fish and chips when we got
back to school. I felt tired after the fishing trip.

THE END

Fishing Story By Michael

On Monday we went fishing at the Panmure
Wharf and our parents and our Nannies came too.
I put my fishing rod into the sea and waited and
waited and waited. But we did not get any fish.
That's OK. We went back to the classroom.
We had fish and chips. I had a good day.