Monday Fishing by Ajani

On Monday we walked to Panmure Wharf and
we went fishing. We got to the Panmure Wharf.
"Oh, No," I said, "We have no bait on our fishing
rod". That means we will catch no fish. But we
still had a good time. And when we got to school
we ate fish and chips.

Monday Fishing By Ana

On Monday we went fishing at Panmure. We
went to Panmure and we didn't catch any fish.
"Oh, no," Ana said, "We didn't catch any fish.
That is OK." Then we came back to school.
We had fish and chips. We had a nice day.

Fishing Story By Michael

On Monday we went fishing at the Panmure
Wharf and our parents and our Nannies came too.
I put my fishing rod into the sea and waited and
waited and waited. But we did not get any fish.
That's OK. We went back to the classroom.
We had fish and chips. I had a good day.

Our Learning Intentions

We are learning to plan our stories.
We are learning to see the parts that make up a story.
We are learning to make our stories interesting.

Setting the Scene - Part of Writing a Story

Once upon a time in a cave lived Ana.
By Charlie Ray

Far, far , away, Charlie-Ray lived in a place called Rainbow's End.
By Ana

Once upon a time there was a freezing sun way up high.
By Jacob

Once upon a time there was a beach in Tonga. The water was cold. There was a lot of fish in the water.
By Michael


A long time ago there was a boy called Jacob.
By Ajani